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Post by Atreides Conscript on Feb 1, 2006 1:34:45 GMT -5
A chirp from above, A wing-beat from below, I toss, I turn, I pomp and I parry, A bank to the left yet roll to the right, I move and I look, and I sing, yet nary, Nary never I think to the depths of my mind, Nary never I hurt to the depths of my heart, I just whistle and flock as if I were wind, The movements of happiness on yon til the end.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Post by gryphonpoet on Feb 1, 2006 11:37:48 GMT -5
If we could only all be swallows, wouldn't the world look and sound so much better?
Nice capture of an image deeper than it seems.
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alexander
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Post by alexander on Feb 2, 2006 7:06:12 GMT -5
Great work! I can get the feeling of the poem. It is enchanting. Keep up the good work.
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