Ten 'til Ten

[Atreides Conscript]

Ten 'til Ten, my watch churns on
Upbeat, aloof, swing on, keep loose
Feet are burning and hearts are yearning
These moves, the truth, night through the roof
Lights are on from dusk to dawn
the life, the fire, may never be gone
But alas it's come and the minute's done
Nine 'til Ten, it's sure been fun.

-A minute in the shoes of swing
Steve Currie

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[eunhathes]

an enjoyable little ditty. Clever and very rewarding at the end. Rounded and subtle.

Puts a smile on my face... =D

[gryphonpoet]

May your fire never go out. Nice work and good symmetry. Kudos!