poem!!!!!!

[Lylie]

The Woman's Revival

Knew not whether it were woman or shadow
Clad in garment so somber and gray
So little relieved from the gray twilight
                                               To the clouded
                                                               Sky

She looked into her lovers face
But hesitated to speak
She conquered her fears
                               and told him of an enemy
                                                        Under the same Roof


She undid her clasp for the latter
And threw it to a distance among the withered leaves
She tool of the formal cap with hair gushing down
                                                   Just to have to put it on
                                                                         For her little

                                                                                        Pearl 

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[gryphonpoet]

This was tough to read with the small font. I'd like to try again with a larger font and please make sure of the spelling. With the p for a q in conquered (Line 8), I am not sure if the other syntax oddities are intentional or typos.

I like the layout and what I did get from the words. I'd like to read the ones that I missed.

[Lylie]

hmmm.... well this is a series of peoms. this is one os the middle ones

[Atreides Conscript]

Interesting, but to me ultimately confusing as well. The layout is good for movement purposes. I'm sure the words and sentences actually mean something... but I cannot for the life of me figure out what. It may be syntax, or it may be too personal to decrypt from a third-person standpoint, but either way I am at a lack.

I'm missing something perhaps?

[gryphonpoet]

How's about taking another thread and posting this in context with the others? I haven't been through this entire room yet, so you may have already. Either way, I'd like to be able to grok its fullness.