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Nov 14, 2006 15:54:52 GMT -5
Post by eunhathes on Nov 14, 2006 15:54:52 GMT -5
I went back and discovered that one of my most beloved poems wasn't here. Apparently, I posted it up on BZ, but not here. Hm... time to rectify that.
In a Box[/b][/size]
I walked inside a box
and, quite frankly, am lost.
I walked and walked 'til feet fell off
and now I sit a lot.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Nov 14, 2006 21:19:40 GMT -5
Post by gryphonpoet on Nov 14, 2006 21:19:40 GMT -5
I always liked the light and whimsical attitude of this one, Eun. Coupled with the way you wrapped a message inside of the humor is an awesome job. Very much like e.e. cummings in its feel.
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Kensai
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Fortes Fortuna Juvat
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Nov 15, 2006 13:59:40 GMT -5
Post by Kensai on Nov 15, 2006 13:59:40 GMT -5
Hmm, A little too much punctuation and proper sentence structure to be e e cummings. If you added abitmorewords and Ohgeez must not forget toAdmire theflowers  Very good poem, I like it! |
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