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A Dream
Sept 14, 2006 11:01:41 GMT -5
Post by curulambe on Sept 14, 2006 11:01:41 GMT -5
I dreamt last night of Katherine, my wife. She went there every night to watch the games, occasionally to hone her skill. I saw her hands as they placed stones, her sharp-boned face framed by a sun-bright halo. She was good, better by far than I, who only stopped the few times I could visit Tokyo's deeps, the smoke-filled basements where we came to play. Two foreigners, one lost, one quite at home; our arrogance repulsed us, like from like. Not until later did we grow to love, as she came to play with the invalid. She placed the stones for me, long-fingered hands dancing across the board while mine lay still, for fear their jerking would destroy the shapes. Once, as we drank clear wine and talked of home, she took my hands, now steady, in her own, and kissed my fingers. That night we made love, the languid passion of immortal youth. I did not see her, then, for seven months, seven long months of salt and steel and blood, of shouts and klaxons long into the night, of screams and fire and ears grown numb with pain. I did not think to see her at the pier when we returned. I had not dared to hope.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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A Dream
Sept 18, 2006 2:42:20 GMT -5
Post by gryphonpoet on Sept 18, 2006 2:42:20 GMT -5
Before I make comment, Curulambe, I have to ask. How in depth of a critique would you like? Light, heavy or "bring it on"?
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A Dream
Sept 18, 2006 10:19:16 GMT -5
Post by curulambe on Sept 18, 2006 10:19:16 GMT -5
Honestly, I don't care. This wasn't a serious exercise. I just had to get the dream down in writing and know that someone had seen it. Do what you will.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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A Dream
Sept 20, 2006 0:53:42 GMT -5
Post by gryphonpoet on Sept 20, 2006 0:53:42 GMT -5
Oh. Ok. Well, you're welcome...
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