alexander
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Post by alexander on Jul 4, 2006 8:06:36 GMT -5
The water, clear as crystal
And smooth as glass
We swam with comfort
Staying all day, in the cool blue heaven.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Post by gryphonpoet on Jul 5, 2006 11:44:55 GMT -5
Nice snapshot of a fun time swimming. Good wording. This is the best I've read from you.... so far.  |
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alexander
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Post by alexander on Jul 11, 2006 13:26:23 GMT -5
I came up with "The Small Lake" when my family and I were getting ready to go swimming at my grandparent's house earlier this week. Just thought you would like to know.
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