alexander
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Post by alexander on Mar 21, 2006 15:42:45 GMT -5
Bald Eagle
Silent when hunting Muscular
Preying Soaring Tearing
The predator of the US skies.
Proud defender of the land
This is a cinquain asigned by my teacher. LMK what you think.
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Post by delicriox on Mar 22, 2006 8:38:47 GMT -5
its not my style but it is pretty good man
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gryphonpoet
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Post by gryphonpoet on Mar 23, 2006 0:29:13 GMT -5
It is a modified cinquain, but still effective nevertheless. The poem shows that you put quite a bit of thought behind it and that you understand the basics of the form. Nice work. I hope your teacher grades you highly for this.  |
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Post by alexander on Mar 23, 2006 18:01:02 GMT -5
I got the idea for "The Bald Predator" when I was assigned to write a Cinquain for a class assignment from my language arts teacher when we started are unit on poetry. At first, I was going to write a poem on the Snowy Owl, but I couldn't think of another classification so I decided on the Bald Eagle instead.
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