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Post by delicriox on Mar 2, 2006 8:56:44 GMT -5
this is what i have got so far about what i told you i wanted to do Alexandar.
A melody on the wind Echos softly in your mind soft is the whisper in your ear as the music swells upon the clouds this is the song beyond the mirror the hymn of your soul the melody of your eternal dreams
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alexander
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Post by alexander on Mar 5, 2006 6:24:34 GMT -5
Nice work! I can really feel the emotion, I think you should continue to write poems, keep up the good work, never stop!
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Post by delicriox on Mar 6, 2006 8:40:52 GMT -5
it takes me a while to get a good one. and if you ask lylie, i usually need some kind of event or feeling to write anything good. other wise it is just junk.
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gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Post by gryphonpoet on Mar 6, 2006 10:41:32 GMT -5
Junk is in the eye of the editor...
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