alexander
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Post by alexander on Jan 2, 2006 14:35:51 GMT -5
Bounce, jump. leap, skip, the car just loves to move
It loves to jog and hop too
The only thing it doesn't like to do, is sit still.
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artemi
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Post by artemi on Jan 16, 2006 12:23:47 GMT -5
I kind of like the... bouncy rythem in this one. It moves nicely with the feel of the poem. Not bad.
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alexander
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Post by alexander on Feb 10, 2006 7:11:23 GMT -5
I got the idea of, "The Skippy Car" when I was in are car and it was bouncing like crazy! I also found the last words from going across the railroad tracks.
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