Excersize #6

[Lylie]

Your list for this excersize is:

death
white
field
block

Lets see what you can come up with.

[artemi]

Valley of the Lost

A field of flowers
Swaying in the cool night breeze.
Sweet smell blocking breath,
Grave stones set under lilies.
In this valley, death wears white

[celest]

The Lost One

In a moment everything changes.
Lying down, awaiting my fate.
A cold block falls apon me.
Cruching all heat and pain.
All feeling fades into coldness.
As my sense cloud with white.

A woman walks up and kneels.
Her face kind and harsh.
She touches my hand and I rise with her.
She guides me to a everlasting field.
Happiness for all who reside here.
Death is a kind woman.

[gryphonpoet]

*Aftermath*

In pale shades, the rider
crosses the plains, soaked crimson now.
One soldier breathes his request as
the dark monk considers, then answers
no
and walks away to leave him living.

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Before anyone posts about this poem, please let me explain a moment. Obviously, I didn't use the words as they were written. Instead, I used them as a basis for the image of the first 4 lines.

Thanks.

[eunhathes]

Between me and Her, there is a white field. It is
Filled with green dreams and hopeful pinks, with
Yellow maybes and amber starlight. There are
Perfect blues and laughing reds. I see them and
They see me. However, Death, standing tall, sees
All this, too. And when he decided to block up her
River, there was naught that I could have done.