gryphonpoet
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Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Post by gryphonpoet on Sept 21, 2005 2:28:07 GMT -5
When the moon has grown so old that it yawns, I yearn for the place where I remain calm. That river flows left to right in front of me as it takes my thoughts were it goes. Behind me the stench of corpses rubs my shoulders while lights flicker at the corners of my eyes. Perhaps you will not be comfortable, surely the dead bring their anger at my presence, but with cleansing water before me and death incarnate behind me, thoughts clear out to leave my mind pristine and operational. I go there tonight. I'll be back at dawn.
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alexander
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Post by alexander on Feb 16, 2006 15:38:05 GMT -5
Great job! The poem "My Place" really makes me feel my place in the world. Great job again, thank you for creating this poem.
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