Lylie
Heroic
I lick you!
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Post by Lylie on Mar 10, 2006 21:55:46 GMT -5
OK so here it is. Here is your list.
can
dell
veranda
burgundy
so then what can you do with it?
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gryphonpoet
Superior
Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
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Post by gryphonpoet on Mar 14, 2006 5:59:52 GMT -5
*Romance In The Air*
The solar blood
turned burgundy across the sky,
as Dell waited another hour.
On the veranda
many miles across the city,
Andrew turned away from it.
As they looked toward each other,
the world slowed to a ladened crawl.
The same thought crept
into their syncopated hearts,
"Are you out there and can I find you?"
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Post by eunhathes on Mar 15, 2006 23:30:49 GMT -5
Stepping out from behind my burgundy lies
the Face I see is only my own.
There are lies and then there are lies.
How many days does the sun hide from the sky?
I work my way across her veranda, the supple
frame woven with vines.
I lie in the open dew, praying for absolution
Yet I know that only she can give me that now.
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gryphonpoet
Superior
Shangri-La is in your mind. Your Buffalo isn't. (Sign in Olympic Village in Beijing)
Posts: 292
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Post by gryphonpoet on Mar 16, 2006 0:25:43 GMT -5
Nice word play in the title, Eun. It took me two looks to catch it. This feels like Poe's "Annabell Lee". Nice work for coming from an exercise. Actually, nice work. Period.  |
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